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First Poetry Performance - Shine So Hard

Tuesday 21 November 2017

Hello. I have been looking at some of my poetry, and well I'm kind of going to recycle it. Basically with the words or ends of lines I am going to create new poems, I'm not sure if this has a proper name but I have been doing a few in my diary I thought it would good to share it here on my blog.
This will be the only time I will tell you where this poem came from, if you read future ones you could easily make links to which previous poems they came from.
This was my first attempt with my poem If, and this is called ?

Control me
make me do?
effect my emotions
make me feel!

Let you in
you let out?
I loved you
me too?

You my tears
show me?
before you
you see?

Both ways
me to do?
you everything
me that too?

?

Monday 28 December 2015

If I let you control me
What would you make me do?
If I let you effect my emotions
What would you make me feel?

If I let you in
What would you let out?
If I told you I loved you
Would you tell me too?

If I showed you my tears
What would you show me?
If I fell a part before you
Would you fix what you see?

If this works both ways
What do you expect me to do?
If I promise you everything
Would you promise me that too?

If

Friday 30 October 2015